Here's process on my latest Incompatibles panel. You can see how I corrected my inaccurate wordsmithing in the rough. It was redundant saying: “kill a dolphin” and “clog our landfills.” Both phrases point only to plastic bags. Luckily my wife saw the error and I corrected it to reflect both plastic and paper. Also, you'll notice I spliced the head in lower right of the page onto the body of the clerk. It seemed to catch the critical vibe I needed in his expression.
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